John Pistelli

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Whose Struggle?

I remember my introduction to conceptual art.  We were in the tenth grade, and our art class had a student teacher, a feminist raver (this was 1997 or so) from Penn State named Ms. Ziggler or something similar.  One day she showed us a slide of Duchamp’s readymade, In Advance of the Broken Arm:

The caption at MoMA’s website, where I got the image, describes the process—“Marcel Duchamp selected a snow shovel, hung it from the ceiling of his studio, and called it art”—and the intent—“His readymades also aimed at shifting viewers’ engagement with works of art from what Duchamp called the ‘retinal’ (pleasing to the eye) to the ‘intellectual’ (in ‘the service of the mind’).”  This intention became clear by the end of our lively debate about the image back in my art class.  Most of us simply dismissed the work as a fraud, a way to get money from the credulous with a minimum of effort.  Some of us tried to rescue the piece as intelligible “art” by picking up on the title’s hint and attributing a narrative content to the image: we thought it was a kind of poetic threat, as in, “I will pick up this shovel and hit you in the arm with it!” or else a traumatic reminiscence, perhaps of childhood (e.g., “A repressed memory of the time dad broke my arm with the shovel just returned to me”).  But most of us simply couldn’t grasp why anyone would do such a thing, why anyone would show such contempt for craft, beauty, competence, labor, mimesis, etc. Then Ms. Ziggler announced the correct verdict: “Look at how pissed off you are by this picture,” she said.  “Obviously it’s got you talking about something!”

In other words, Hegel was right: art has been nothing but a long succession of attempts to incarnate truth within sensuous media—arrangements of words, colors, forms, sounds—but now that we have arrived at a correct philosophical understanding of history and our role in creating it through thought and action, we can discuss the truth directly with a minimum of sensuous mediation.  Art was a means to truth, but, in providing truth directly, philosophy has superseded art; concepts have therefore replaced beauty, which was only ever a vehicle for concepts in the first place.  At the end of history, art’s only possible justification (and it is a weak one) is as spur to debate, goad to dialectics.  You’re not really supposed to look at it, you’re supposed to talk about it.

Literature has had its own version of this movement, as in Kenneth Goldsmith’s recent defense of Uncreative Writing.  That book stages a number of pedagogical scenes in which “conceptual” writing (transcribing the phone book and the like) really gets his classes talking.  But literature has in general proven much more resistant to avant-gardization or Hegelization.  Even Joyce and Kafka have been eulogized as humanists; even Woolf and Beckett pulled back from the end of art—she wrote The Waves and then turned back to realism and history, he wrote “Ping” but then wrote Company.  Literature’s versions of Duchamp, e.g., Gertrude Stein or William S. Burroughs, never achieved the hegemony within literature that Duchamp’s methods did within art.  Ulysses is not Fountain, and The Waste Land is not In Advance of the Broken Arm.  Because literature is an artistic medium using language, it cannot really attain full abstraction; as Mikhail Bakhtin once observed somewhere, words always mean.  As much as literary modernists wanted, rightly, to dispense with the overt rhetorical appeals of their Victorian precursors, they could not make the literary work wholly hermetic, an intrinsically meaningless address to the intellect.  The fragmented speaker’s struggle for meaning in The Waste Land, Leopold Bloom’s lonely and thoughtful wandering, Lily Briscoe’s attempt to have her vision, the Unnameable’s persistence of utterance in the absence of all guaranteed knowledge or communication—these monuments of modernism are as deeply and humanely moving as anything in the literary tradition.  They are embedded in dense and resistant artworks with an undeniable conceptual dimension, but in the end their significance is not only and not even primarily conceptual; they affect the emotions, they produce sympathetic laughter and empathetic tears.

The above is a long way for me to ask what Karl Ove Knausgaard’s My Struggle is supposed to be.  I have read a little more than 80 pages in a state of irritated boredom.  There is a good kind of literary boredom, when the text seems to be recalcitrant or aggressive, to be turning you away from what you want to know (think of Henry James or Toni Morrison) or telling you more than you want to know (think of Joyce) or trying to get you to resonate to a slower or longer life-rhythm (think of Tolstoy or Cather).  But those kinds of boredom are ultimately accompanied by pleasure, something like the pleasure of physical exercise; they carry the feeling that, despite the momentary discomfort, you are accomplishing necessary work or communing with the difficulties of life itself, in its essence, by struggling with literary form.  This is not the kind of good boredom Knausgaard produces in me; his text is in no way difficult, nor is its pace even all that slow for a “literary novel.”  It’s just that I don’t care, either about the text itself (which is pedestrian, plodding between unadorned description/narration/dialogue and an essayism that I guess is supposed to be profound but sounds to me like slice-of-life stand-up comedy [“What’s the deal with funeral parlors?  Why are they always on the ground floor?”]) or about the characters (none of whom are vividly evoked anyway, aside from Knausgaard and his father).

The Knausgaard-lovers claim to be thoroughly entertained, addicted even (it’s like crack, says Zadie Smith—and when did Zadie Smith get hooked on crack? at Cambridge or at Harvard?).  They speak of the pleasures of identification.  Maybe this is my problem—I don’t identify with Knausgaard.  I am not of his generation, did not really have the “normal” childhood and teen years his novel describes, do not now have a big family keeping me from my literary endeavors, etc.  My struggle is not his.  But a novel that fails to satisfy anyone who doesn’t see him- or herself depicted precisely and demographically in the protagonist can hardly be counted a literary success.  I am not a Russian ax-murderer or a bug in Prague or a clone doomed to die at 30, yet Crime and Punishment and The Metamorphosis and Never Let Me Go feel as if they are addressed to my own most profound experiences and concerns.  So if you can only appreciate Knausgaard if you identify with him, then I have no trouble writing him off; he’s not for me, and that’s all there is to say.  But still, something seemed not right about the most high-profile dissent from Knausgaard, that of William Deresciewicz:

Nor do I agree with Smith and Wood that Knausgaard’s method constitutes a stay against oblivion. “Writing promises to rescue moments from the march of time,” says Wood, but Knausgaard’s approach to arresting the flux resembles yet another tech-enabled practice, common now especially among parents: he photographs everything, as if everything could be saved, and as if such a record were sufficient in itself. His book is like a box of snapshots—no, a steamer trunk, a shipping container. Their very profusion makes each of them null. What’s needed is attention of a different kind. One painting, not a hundred thousand pictures. The patience to create the beauty that in turn creates significance.

I agree with this, and with most of Deresciewicz’s complaints.  I especially appreciate his refusal to capitulate to the ascription of heroic or anti-heroic modernism to Knausgaard: “Lionel Trilling wrote some fifty years ago about ‘the modern self-consciousness and the modern self-pity.’ Today he’d also say, the modern self-inflation. I’m Hitler! I’m Proust!”  The Romantic and modernist project was a mission to rescue experience from the clockwork oblivion of secular/materialist progressivism, from Blake’s “eternity in a grain of sand” to Wordsworth’s “spots of time” to Pater’s “gem-like flame” to Joyce’s “epiphanies” to Proust’s “memoire involontaire” to Woolf’s “moments of being” to Benjamin’s “jetztzeit“—but all of these involved a journey deeper and deeper into the single moment, each required some delicate or off-center or roundabout approach, a way of writing around the thing you most wanted to write about.  Think of how death is handled in the great modernist narratives, almost always with a kind of ritual diffidence: Rudy in Ulysses, Mrs. Ramsay in To the Lighthouse, Quentin in The Sound and the Fury, the baby in Beloved.  There is a tact in all these that I don’t see in Knausgaard, an indefinable quality that Harold Bloom once somewhat grandiloquently called aesthetic dignity.  Knausgaard’s willfully hurried performance, his attempt to force his way past the barriers of artifice straight into the clearing of truth where birth and love and death converge, just strikes me as naive, even adolescent, more akin to Allen Ginsberg than the modernists.  “Forget art, just say it!”  But you can’t say it.  Never mind the novel, even in everyday life you can’t just say it.  Artifice is the only way to say it.  I recall Mulholland Drive, in which the most extraordinary scene, the performance that seems to burn its way through the screen, comes in Naomi Watts’s character’s rehearsal for a movie role. “The Truth of Masks” is how Wilde put it; his countryman Yeats likewise wrote of “the artifice of eternity.”

But we’re sick and tired of artifice.  This is what Deresciewicz plainly misses.  Knausgaard, like David Shields, like so many of us, is done with novels, doesn’t want to see another word of free indirect discourse, of foreshadowing, of irony, of implication, of narrative, of drama.  He doesn’t care about any of these aesthetic scruples that Deresciewicz learned at Yale, is manifestly trying to do without them.  He longs to touch the naked flesh of the world directly, to walk naked down the street.  We are in that kind of historical moment, the kind that longs to put a period to history, to bring an end to the struggle and have the truth in hand.  In such moments, when Hegel convinces us that forms are exhausted and meaning imminent, we get conceptual artworks.  Is that what My Struggle is?  A gadfly work meant to sting us into thought and talk?  Whatever it is, I certainly can’t read it.  And however much the title is genuinely and legitimately supposed to be both an irony and a reclamation…  Well, I won’t finish that sentence.  I will only say that making complex artifacts out of traditional materials to engage the senses, the emotions, and the intellect all at once, takes a certain faith.  When that faith wanes, as it does, fearful certainties can take its place.  I’m not talking about Knausgaard’s intentions, which I’m sure are unimpeachable, but about the logic and the force of his chosen form, about where that leads, that desire to do away with art and have truth, about how the conceptual can come in advance not of plenitude but of brokenness, even of ruins…

14 comments on “Whose Struggle?

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  4. The Angler
    12 March 2015

    “But we’re sick and tired of artifice.” Thank you for saying that. I’ve been pouring over Deresciewicz’s review as a kind of challenge to what I feared was my uncritical acceptance of Knausgaard’s novel. Unlike you, I have been fascinated by My Struggle. But that fascination might be that Knausgaard and I are the same age, we are stay at home dads who jealously guard their time to write, we have read the same books, listened to the same music, both played and love soccer. If I were six inches taller and had a beard…

    One of my friends who is about a decade younger, doesn’t get Knausgaard either.

    I’ve read Knausgaard’s earlier novel, A Time for Everything, and I found on first reading that I was bored and frustrated with that, probably because it was a fully realized work of artifice (perhaps more to Deresciewicz’s taste?). Though after reading Vol 3 of My Struggle, I returned to A Time for Everything and read it again and now I love it too, perhaps even more than My Struggle.

    NB. There’s a few crossovers between A Time for Everything and My Struggle. For a writer who is interested in seeing how to transform life into art, comparing the relevant sections from A Time for Everything and Vol 2 of My Struggle is a worthwhile activity.

    • johnpistelli
      13 March 2015

      Thanks for commenting! A Time for Everything sounds exactly like a novel I would enjoy, something I would seek out. It does seem that the people who enjoy My Struggle most are those who can identify with Knausgaard’s experiences; perhaps it’s a generational book in that sense.

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  6. Israel Project Writer
    20 March 2016

    Thanx for interesting post. I want to give My Struggle 3 another shot, I’ve been reflecting upon the nature of spontaneous prose and pop art and writing and wonder if there is a line that can been drawn from Kerouac’s On the Road (which I love) over I’ll Be Your Mirror: The Selected Andy Warhol Interviews 1962-1987 to Knausgard (or maybe not, maybe we’ve moved from proustian spirituality to beautiful emptiness, what do you think? I’d love to hear it.

    • johnpistelli
      21 March 2016

      Thanks for commenting! I have actually not read On the Road; with the exception of Burroughs, the Beats have never much interested me–though Burroughs is obviously one of the great artists of beautiful emptiness (it helps to be capable of writing beautiful prose, as he was). With Warhol too—I have not read the book you mention, but am quite familiar with his work, being a fellow Pittsburgher—I find that the concept is self-sufficient enough that there is no real need to look at his work. I don’t think we have moved on to emptiness—it has been there in the tradition since the Iliad, it’s there in Shakespeare and Tolstoy and Woolf and Borges—we have only dispensed with the beauty. And that is what I am objecting to.

      • Israel Project Writer
        21 March 2016

        I see. Maybe I have a different view or taste in what I regard as beauty, because Kenneth Goldsmith and the Warhole-aesthetic is something I find interresting, like the conceptual things you mention, or Allen Ginsberg, I just think it’s boring when nothing happens in a stpry, which is the case with Knausgaard. Maybe it’s the storytelling I miss, and that is done better in a book like On the Road, which was written in a similar spontaneous way (3 weeks). Generally speaking I prefer spontanity to writers who shits marmor (if that’s the english word for the stone the greecs built statues in. What I think is missing from Knausgard is the story, on with the story said John Barth, and Kerouac read both Proust and Jack London. I like beauty with sex appeal

      • johnpistelli
        21 March 2016

        Ha, I would define what I like as beauty with sex appeal too, but I really don’t care for work that is just there to think about. I think all art is conceptual anyway, so it might as well have that address to the senses that Duchamp dismissed as mere optical interest. And I guess I am more interested in language and psychology than story, hence my love of Woolf and Joyce. But I do like story too, nothing wrong at all with Jack London! Or Dickens or Poe or Shirley Jackson or whoever else is exciting and literary at the same time. I suspect the fringes of pop culture, like the weird comics I sometimes write about, are more conceptually radical than more academic avant-garde stuff like Goldsmith (and they have sex appeal in a much more literal way!). Maybe our tastes can be reconciled with Cesar Aira, whom I wrote about recently. He’s avant-garde and conceptual, in that he writes only forward, no revision or anything, such that every book is an experiment; but the novels, or the one I read anyway, are as eventful, beautiful, etc. as anything. Thanks again for the comment; fun discussion!

      • Israel Project Writer
        22 March 2016

        That’s probably true, I think the Neil Gaiman stuff I’ve read teaches me more about america than Seven Deaths And Disasters – and more about the human being. You’re probably right about your Duchamp argument too, after all Duchamp wouldn’t have been an artist if he wasn’t clever to get away with things. I see that my public library has the book Cómo me hice monja and the dvd Tan de repente by Aira, so maybe that’s a good place to start with him? Thanks to you too, I also like the discussion!

      • johnpistelli
        22 March 2016

        How I Became a Nun is the one I plan to read next (if I ever finish Mann’s Magic Mountain, which takes a very long time to read, another reason there’s been little but comic book reviews at my blog lately)! I look forward to your thoughts on Aira, hope I have not led you astray!

      • Israel Project Writer
        22 March 2016

        I’m sure I’ll like him. I’ll let you know! Good luck with Mann, and remember that he stole all his plots from the Bible and Goethe, or so I’ve heard, so you’ve maybe read it before, in a different form.

      • johnpistelli
        22 March 2016

        Thanks! I dimly perceive the Goethe hiding behind Mann’s novel, so you are right about that!

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